Thursday, February 22, 2007

Shut out

Oh, wow, I think this is another shut out. Maybe may work here is done?

So, according to tradition, a joke from the kids page of the L.A. Times, from Davit, age 11, Los Angeles.

Why did the bee join a rock band?
So it could be the lead stinger.

Well, Davit, that's pretty funny, but it could be a little tighter. Try it this way: Did you hear about that new bee band? They've recorded the backing tracks, but they're still looking for a lead stinger.

See if telling it that way doesn't get you some bigger laughs. Keep it up, you're on your way, kiddo.


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